In the weekends i went to a my friend,s Addison,s house we really were meant to stay till 2.30 but jenny Addison,s mum told my mum on the phone to change it to dinner because jenny sore me and Addison were having so mush fun after dinner jenny changed it to a sleepover we were so happy my sister stayed with as the hole time but at night Amelia got scared and went home ya for me and Addison but we still had Spencer to dell with . i love playing with Addison in the morning we played on the tramp we played schools and played on a swing after the swing i went home the next day Addison Spencer my sisters friend and my friend came to my home and stayed for 9 hours we played on my phone most of the time the times we were not on the phone we were playing on the tramp THE END not i love playing on the tramp on the tramp me and Addison spot a spider i hate spiders every one got frightened and ran away
Tuesday, July 21, 2020
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Hi Amber, it sounds like you an Addison had a great time! I remember how much fun sleepovers were when I was young, very cool. Did you watch any movies before bed?
ReplyDeleteNo but it was so fun
Deletehi Amber its me Niya
ReplyDeleteHi Amber I relay liked the way you explained of what you did at the sleepover but just remember to cheek your writing before publishing your story onto your blog. And this story about your sleepover remind me when I had a sleepover with my friends.
ReplyDeleteKia ora I'm Mikayla from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI like this because i didn,t have one yet but i found out it was so much fun.
this rember me of when i had a play date.
Next time you could writi a bit more about the sleepover and could you talk about more things you did on the sleepover is well .
from Mikayla